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My first attempt at haiku.

Good? Bad? Who knows.

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This is the third haiku I've seen today and I never know what to say about them, lol. I like the effect they create and this one works well. Maybe you could add more verses though as it's hard to know what's happening in such a short piece.

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very political, in my mind. it's asking the world's players to put on a broad smile for the cameras, no matter what sh!t is going off behind the polished eyes.
i liiiikey. i'm gonna :+fav:!!

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